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Offline Screenor

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New Work (finally?).
« on: September 07, 2005, 02:29:44 am »
Well, been nearly 5 months since I released something fully done by myself, for myself, and quite frankly I've been sick of it, so here's my final product after seperated timing's of work throughout about a week and a half.



Why the gangster look? Simple, it's not gangster, it's an ak47, from Counter-Strike, the city in the background adds a nice effect to it, somewhat invisible, but that's what I was aiming for, but meh.

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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2005, 07:49:15 am »
The gun is too dark, the text blur is really un-necessary and looks crappy.
i liked your red one more. ;)
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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2005, 03:39:47 pm »
Why is there an AK ontop of what looks like a city...?
And like a fool I believed myself, and thought I was somebody else...

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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2005, 03:49:49 pm »
I noticed the city way before the gun, nice invisible look. ;) And the city is much better design, that should be the main thing.. The gun is pointless.
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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2005, 04:47:57 pm »
The gun is too dark, the text blur is really un-necessary and looks crappy.
i liked your red one more. ;)
Red one..? And there is no blur on the text, that's a font bud.

I noticed the city way before the gun, nice invisible look. ;) And the city is much better design, that should be the main thing.. The gun is pointless.
Yeah, I recieved the same from a lot of other people as well, but this is going to be like a beta for a new design I'm working on, so eh, we'll see how this turns out.

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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2005, 06:41:50 pm »
Your red abstract one.
And the blur I mean the animation.. It just looks like you're blurring it and moving it.
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Re: New Work (finally?).
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2005, 06:45:34 pm »
Screenor, care to make me a signature typeish thing exactly like that.

The exact city, no gun, and where screenor is you can put Krazed?

I really like the city, and the flashing text... a lot. Definatley 8.5/10 on that.

The gun is pointless though.
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